That was pretty funny. Very clear on what was going on. Terrific idea.
I think what needs to be worked on is voice acting. Like it was good for what you used for a minimal amount of VA'ing. However get your NOOOOOO a little more accentuated.
Other than that, work on your anatomy a bit for your characters. I don't know Flash at all, however when your camera pans/trucks towards the end your guys' faces move. Might wanna fix that a bit.
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Nalcania2 Says:
Muy bueno, Muy buena, pero no hablo mucho español. Pensé que era comico
The DUDE 316 Says:
Hehe tremenda animacion. Eso ami me paso tambien...ahora voy a planear mi venganza con PH.
CynDer Says:
jajajajajaja esta genial eso la venga siempre te conforma
DaN DaRk 1012 Says:
nada mal nada mal, me gustan las musicas que usas.
TomSka Says:
I think this was good. You got around the lack of voice acting by having clear speech bubbles and an overall solid narrative.
Despite lacking in great animation and side splitting humour its pretty impressive.
Also, I notice that my voice from EWZA3 was in there. Haha
Overall, keep working hard and making lots of animations and you'll be making great stuff soon
Remember, its all about practice!
- TomSka
Strange Axel Says:
That was pretty funny. Very clear on what was going on. Terrific idea.
I think what needs to be worked on is voice acting. Like it was good for what you used for a minimal amount of VA'ing. However get your NOOOOOO a little more accentuated.
Other than that, work on your anatomy a bit for your characters. I don't know Flash at all, however when your camera pans/trucks towards the end your guys' faces move. Might wanna fix that a bit.
You're pretty good with FLASH!
Sonucais Says:
Uh que buena, no esta nada mal. Cuanto llevas en flash?
JeffStudios Says:
Not bad.
Could you watch my animation and give me your mind please?
Thank you
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1642186/
This is the URL.
its cool