1st page of RDs! (random Doujins)

This is another installment of my Random Doujins. No, this is only the first page so don't worry. It gets far better, you can trust me. xD

Yes i used the actual death note manga chapter 99 page 2 for this one -___- But i promise, this is the only one that will use a ref.... I just wanted to sorta make it look like the real deal, then it gets totally like "WTF??" Promise!

Characters, story, and ref (c)Tsugumi Ohba and Takeshi Obata
crapy art (c) Me of course