Amiable Sorcery

Amiable
sorcery
flickers through passing cars

arbitrable
boundaries
remain through plastic czars.

Discardable
harmonies
retained through hypnotic hawking;

Seasonable
archeries
that can't break through all the talking.

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Dec 24th 2007

Tags:: human nature lyric sorcery
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A simple ABC ABC ABD ABD rhyme scheme, but took me too long to do anyway. Finally decided to put it up instead of waiting til (that probably never-dawning) day I was actually happy with it. Oh well.

Supremely belated happy birthday, Jake.

Comments

CaptainLysi Says:

I really like it. =D It has a nice flow

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paGLiacciO Says:

It seems like a poem you'd have spoken with a soft woman's voice and ssssshhhh noises and foot stomping in the background.

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ZombiexPanda Says:

Jake doesnt have birthdays. He has days about a month or so after his celebration-of-not-dying at birth where people go "Oh, here, have this."

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GoLdMaGeAcE Says:

Simple, yet very satisfying :3
Like a good piece of chocolate, so small that it has to be savored.

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gnome7 Says:

I love it - it is very serene.

And more importantly, it gave me an idea of something to draw. Inspiration is always nice.

Thank you, Avis. It is beautiful.