Hmm, you haven't updated in awhile. I haven't seen if the story ends with your latest installment, but when you update again could you work on how they speak? Make it seem less.....gangster? More... civilized perhaps?
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Modest Says:
Hmm, you haven't updated in awhile. I haven't seen if the story ends with your latest installment, but when you update again could you work on how they speak? Make it seem less.....gangster? More... civilized perhaps?