Cardboard Love

by Nakia Otieno

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Cardboard Love

I see you now, across the room
Your hands pinned at your side
I know your skin is smooth to touch
And how your hand fits well in mine

And if I push you hard enough
I know you’ll crease and bend
And when I don’t want you next to me
It’s not hard to make you tear and rend

And when I cry my empty tears
Your hands will fill and wilt
And when your fingers brush my cheek
I know they’ll crumble like fine silt

Oh, I know how perfect we would be
If you could wrap your arms around me
Whisper in my ear and make me yours
Swear to me I’m all you’ll see

And I’ll be yours, my sweet, my lovely
My beautiful cardboard prince.
> 'Supernatural Desktop' by Nakia Otieno

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Dec 5th 2007
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cardboard critique cut human nature love nakia out prince relationships romance tempest
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In my Western Humanities class today, we were discussing Shakespeare's The Tempest. My teacher used an interesting phrase to describe Ferdinand and Miranda's relationship-"Cardboard cut out love". That inspired me to write this. Hope you enjoy it.

Preview picture is Cain from Kaori Yuki's Godchild.

Comments

FairyTails24 Says:

yesh!!! first comment lol that is so awsome!!!! i could have never thought of something like that...very nice

Whisper to the Wind Says:

Awwwwwwww that was so Cute Loved it

Ushee Says:

Beautiful poem, it really has some powerful emotions

diamond dragon Says:

ooooooooooo....nice....also very godchildish

Bradhadair Says:

pretty my only thing is that it seems like you're trying to rhyme but there's not really a rhyme scheme....but I loves it so yeah....

Anjiru Ookami Says:

So, awesome

martysexylegs Says:

holy shit! your good................sorry i passed out there from all the amazing-ness!

shaolinwolf Says:

Oooo.... very nice!!

MiyokoDosei Says:

awww that's so sweet! and kinda sad in places ^^