Yeah, first time trying full body. D: Didn't go as i planned, but i guess practice makes perfect. I should probably use an actual skeleton to draw the body.. :/
But please leave any feedback or comments please. D': I want to improve :/
neck is just a bit wierd on the left (is that just me?)
the upper part of the arms looks oaky from my view but then after the shirt folds up it looks like the elbow and below got squished together.
Hint*(or atleast kinda one) Stand up and look where your fingertips end. That's where they should in your pic too.
Actually, most of it looks pretty okay... other than his arms.
They're too short. :I
His neck is the right thickness in proportion to his head.
Though maybe you could make his shoulders a little less slouched?
..we'll work on clothes later. xD;
not bad for your first attempt! Although, from the gut down it started not to look good. The head might need just a little adjustment. all in all, not bad. Whenever you got free time, just sit down and doodle. Every mistake and error turns into an improvement and in time, a masterpiece. You'll feel that it'll come out better and then find ways to simplify it.
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Well I have to say you do a hell of alot better than I do.
hyperactiveice Says:
Okay...
neck is just a bit wierd on the left (is that just me?)
the upper part of the arms looks oaky from my view but then after the shirt folds up it looks like the elbow and below got squished together.
Hint*(or atleast kinda one) Stand up and look where your fingertips end. That's where they should in your pic too.
Oh well just seeing if I could help. ^_____^
Actually, most of it looks pretty okay... other than his arms.
They're too short. :I
His neck is the right thickness in proportion to his head.
Though maybe you could make his shoulders a little less slouched?
..we'll work on clothes later. xD;
Aww, you did so well~ I'm proud of you.
CuteGoth12 Says:
It's quite good, but I'm going to point out some things, and you shouldn't listen to me actually, because I suck ,but okay...
The neck is a bit odd, I think his chest is a bit too big for his legs, idk, i'm not good at anatomy, so don't trust this.
And the arms, are a bit short.
But seriously, this is really good, even with the things I mentioned, I'm sorry if I'm too harsh.. >___>
I do like it though!!
CloudyCloud Says:
not bad for your first attempt! Although, from the gut down it started not to look good. The head might need just a little adjustment. all in all, not bad. Whenever you got free time, just sit down and doodle. Every mistake and error turns into an improvement and in time, a masterpiece. You'll feel that it'll come out better and then find ways to simplify it.
MGChibi Says:
Aw, good job~