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Of Nothing In Paticular *~Chapter one~*
Riot sat on the bench in the park she watched as the snow started to fall. Riot began to ask herself,
"Why?" Riot interrogated.
"I'm only 8, and I feel a lot of pressure, Grip." Riot said jumping off the bench.
Grip sighed, "It's not easy being 9 neither, so quit your complaining!" Grip wasn't always the happy cheerful one sometimes, you could tell he was unhappy.
"We're not... Ya know... Normal..." Grip Growled. He continued,"We're separated by everything, I mean we're like... Demons or something."
Riot thought to herself and said with a grin,"At least we have each other, right?
Grip shook his head,"One day I'll be the leader of the world."
Riot looked into the sky,"Maybe, so?"
Grip took Riot by the hand,"It's a promise!"
"A promise?!" A voice came from behind them.
Grip scowled,"Damon and Chaos."
Chaos flipped her hair back and said with a fake smile,"Miss us?"
Damon jumped on the bench,"I believe your on my bench, Grip."
Damon and Grip were always friends, but ever since our eldest leader died, they've been against each other to get the leader title.
"Stop it you fools!" Riot snapped.
Chaos growled,"Stay out of it!" Chaos tackled Riot to the ground.
"Hi" A girl came up to all of us with a smile on her face."I'm Maria."
Riot looked up to her and noticed she was wearing a skirt and snapped,"Why the hell are you wearing a skirt in weather in that is in the negatives?!"
Grip and Damon started to laugh at her.
Chaos hit Riot on her head making her face go back into the snow and snapped,"Thats not nice Riot!"
Maria kicked Riot in the arm and Riot snapped,"What the he-" Riot stared at her practically frozen by the glimpse of Maria's eyes.
Maria giggled and walked away Damon took Riot by the collar and shook her."Whats wrong with you?!" He yelled.
Riot shook her head and pulled away from Damon,"Enough I say!" She said.
Grip looked at Riot who was staring at the way Maria went."She's human, her glimpse froze you up. It happens to all of us"
Riot snapped out of it,"That's what it was? Are you sure?"
Chaos said with a retarded voice,"No duh, Sherlock!"
Riot thought to herself,"She can't be human. I looked at many humans before, and I never got that feeling.
Grip, Damon, and Chaos yelled for Riot as she still sat in the snow thinking, she snapped out of it
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NOTI HATAKE 88 Says:
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Yoruhoshi Says:
Nice. You do have some work to do with phrasing and such, and maybe a little with how the plotline flows, but otherwise it's good.