I know it doesn’t seem to have really a rhyme scheme, but trust me it does.
First three are on group : sorrow and illusionist (abb; abb; aaaa)
Second group of three is an early bridge: more of anger and determination (abb (slow transition) abbc; abbc (dramatic))
Third group returns with sorrow and illusion (same format as first group)
Fourth group is the awakening, not of anger but more so almost acceptance and displays completely different than the others: (abba; aba; aba)
Ah yes, there is some method to my madness.
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Wanted to wait till Dec. 4th to submt, but I’ll have more…
~Anyways~
For Shu
*Pic from Gravitation
Comments
Fanime234 Says:
This is really good
Very touching.
Ozzyturtle123 Says:
Very nice. Again, I'm sorry for your loss.
KingOfNothing Says:
Ummm... well... this is the first time I've read something about this and not cried... I had a deep loss... Really cool poetry. you could go far.
Gartenian Princess Says:
This is lovely...and touching...