We Keep Waiting

by Majic510

in Completed Works

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We Keep Waiting

Keep Waiting
11-20-07

We keep waiting for you
To pop your head in and say
Sorry that I've been away

We keep waiting for you
To appear out of no where
And have a crazy story to share

We keep waiting but we know
You're never coming home
Our memories can't atone
A face that was never shown

No, no we won't admit
I will not say it; you're not gone
But you've been away for so long

Locked between Heaven and Hell
Angel, without a face, where are you hiding?
Angel, can you not escape, are you crying?
Can I break you from your prison?

Step right in; sweet Purgatory
Please, where can I pay admission?
I'll never give into submission
Such a selfish, helpless decision

We keep waiting for you
But you are no where to be found
No matter how far I go below the ground

We keep waiting for you
Please, may I wake your sleeping?
Take you from everlasting dreaming

We keep waiting but we know
You're never coming home
Our memories can't atone
A face that was never shown

No, we must our Angel go
It's time to let you rest peacefully
My grip finally releasing
You're lonely, weeping soul

We keep waiting
With broken hearts
That can't keep breaking

Hands reaching, so far apart
Will you keep waiting
When we depart?

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Nov 23rd 2007
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I know it doesn’t seem to have really a rhyme scheme, but trust me it does.
First three are on group : sorrow and illusionist (abb; abb; aaaa)
Second group of three is an early bridge: more of anger and determination (abb (slow transition) abbc; abbc (dramatic))
Third group returns with sorrow and illusion (same format as first group)
Fourth group is the awakening, not of anger but more so almost acceptance and displays completely different than the others: (abba; aba; aba)
Ah yes, there is some method to my madness.

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Wanted to wait till Dec. 4th to submt, but I’ll have more…
~Anyways~
For Shu

*Pic from Gravitation

Comments

Fanime234 Says:

This is really good Very touching.

Ozzyturtle123 Says:

Very nice. Again, I'm sorry for your loss.

KingOfNothing Says:

Ummm... well... this is the first time I've read something about this and not cried... I had a deep loss... Really cool poetry. you could go far.

Gartenian Princess Says:

This is lovely...and touching...