KH: AkuRoku - Fall -Commish-

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Nov 15th 2007

Tags:: akuroku axel fanart game hearts human kingdom roxas yaoi
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Where do I start from, where...

Okay, so this kind girl, Jadedsilk (account on Y!Gallery, don't know if she has one here), bought my first commish. She wanted Axel and Roxas walking by the park, autumn theme, all romantic. So... this is what came out. And NOPE, I did certainly NOT draw the background. I wanted to, but the commish is already delayed enough and, truth be told, I suck with backgrounds. Gotta practice.

Anyway, I'm mostly proud of this one. And just don't ASK why Roxas' scarf is so... fluffy. I don't understand it either.

And yeah, I put a big and nasty text stating that this pic is owned by Jadedsilk. Credit is mine, obviously, but she will be emailed with the actual quality of the picture (sweet lord, 150 MB psb file!! wtf!!).

Hope you like it :) Remember encouraging criticism is always welcome!

Done entirely with Photoshop CS3 + My dear tablet Goya + Photo of a park edited + So many hours I wanna cry

Comments

MarrieNL Says:

Hey, it's beautiful!! Especially the background(nothing wrong with that) and the Axel's jacket!*drools* Roxas seem to have a goatee chin, wich I ADORE as well!! The colouring is great!
You want critique? First of all I suck at legs so I don't know how to explain it right, but Axel's right looks a little bit incorrectly bent..but I know he is walking. His left trouser looks awesome in folds instead! And Roxas' bottom is a bit tick shaped by the clothing..for futher I see nothing wrong. I actually the fluffy scarf!!
I think you did an excellent job! I couldn't do that