Naruto Chrono Crusade: Chapter 1

by alicedragon

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Naruto Chrono Crusade: Chapter 1

Chapter 1; The War

Mizuki burst into the Kusakage's office.

"Kusakage-sama!"

"Huhnnnnn...? What? What's going on?" Replied the Kusakage sleeply.

"It's the eastern wall! It's being attacked by sand-nin!!!!!!"

The Kusakage imediatly rushed into action, pushing her teddy bear chibi-chan out the way, she commanded Mizuki to get the summoning and barrier squad to the wall to try and stop the nin from coming into the village.

Putting her shoes on the Kusakage ran outside to find a horde of ninja attacking the eastern wall. rushing into action, she lept from her baloncy and sealing as she flew down she cut her thumb and shouted out to the high heavens 'KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU!!!!' summoning a giant blue snake named Raishida.

"Raion-Chan" said Rashida "This better be good, i was reading a good book"

"Don't worry Rash-Chan. Look over there." said the Kusakage pointing over east.

Spitting venom at the floor Rashida slithered over to the eastern wall. When they got there, the Kusakage jumped off of Rashida's back and swung her Kusangi in the air. Small leaves swished through the air and hit the sand-nin. They screamed with pain and the Kusakage's lips curved.

The Summoning squad were slowly but surely drving back the Ninja when one shouted out 'Retreat!' then all but a few ran back across the barren land to the wind country.

Leaning back in her seat, Raion shut her eyes. 'Gah.' She thought. 'That's the 3rd attack this week, soon we'll be attacked everyday...' and then at that point Sashi Kimiso, Koruku Mizuki and Yubuta Hasushi cam into her office.

"Yes?" She said bluntly.

"umm... Kusakage-Sama?" Said Mizuki.

"Yeah, what is it? Spit it out, I haven't got all day...."

"It's just...." Tears started to flow down her cheeks "Uhio-Sensei was......."

"it's ok Mizuki-Chan, I'll Tell her" Said Kasushi "Uhio-Sensei got killed by a sand-nin."

Raion sat there, dumbstruck. "Damn it....."

Yoshu Tenko walked in. "The effects of war....." He said, "Take a heavy toll on everybody...'



Next Time;

Umikura, Akumukura And Kusakura; United In Pain!

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Nov 12th 2007
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Naruto (C) Mamashi Kishimoto

Raion and the rest (C) Me

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Miyuki Nara Says:

whoa excellent start my friend

achitka Says:

Is nice to see another female leader beside Tsunade in Naruto's world. It was a start and the characters sound interesting enough, but even if it was just the beginning...seemed a bit on the really short side. A few character descriptions would also be very helpful...since I have no idea how old these people are so is hard to place their dialog in any kind of context...uh yeah

Still kinda like it though - will have to stop back some time to see what happens next

IF none of that made any sense - well don't worry about it - just keep pluggin away and happy writing!

cya - achitka

DeidaraSan Says:

NICE!