{ My Immortal Sky }

by FireFLY Xx

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{ My Immortal Sky }

My immortal sky will never die
It holds the universe within
The stars keep our light alive
As they dance across my sky

As i sit on the ground, looking up in the dark
What could I possibly see?
My deepened dark dreary sky
Will forever look over me

A gentle breeze, blows over my knees
and up and through my beloved body
It made my skin tingle and creep
Im am so tierd, I need my sleep

Though I cannot look away from the sight
I am mezmerized by its beautiful light
My mind is wondering...Wondering how
How can I keep this night?

My immortal sky will never die
> ':: K I R L I A ::' by FireFLY Xx

Description

Nov 9th 2007
Tags:
immortal nature sensual sky spiritual
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It was a project my teacher made us do. Write a poem in 10 minutes.

When i finished, I really loved the outcome. Though it may not be perfect.

Edgar Allan Poe inspired me

Pic form Deviant Art

edit:
The things used in this poem are iternal rhyme, alliteration, and something else

Comments

Cyril Says:

And it worked much. Very lovely. Some of the rhythm was weird to me, but it was a solid poem.

NOT AN EMO Says:

... you're real good at doing poems.

Jasuperu Says:

...sooooo beautiful, made me havin'tears in me eyes!

LonelyCatAngelKaty Says:

i love it it made me close my eyes as imanging the same thing it felt like i was there

NeedleAndThread Says:

Oh my god This is so beautiful!
I love it to peices. This should get featured or front page. Even though it is short... ^^

cellieruru Says:

You've gotten so much better! I'm so proud of you~~~

sugarcrazedduckie Says:

I really like the meanings in this poem. well written. and you're definitely improving.