Woo!
Fiiiiiiiinally finished with the revamping of that stupid page one of The Warehouse. I turned it into a four-page prologue with '1A, 1B' instead of '1, 2' for the page numbers because, were I to change them to pages 1, 2, 3, and 4, I'd have to change the seventeen OTHER manga pages that I've got... Needless to say, I figured this was easier. >>;;; And less time-consuming.
I revamped it because I just hated the way page one looked. It'll remain in my gallery for all to see and compare, but this prologue is going to be the introduction to my manga and into page TWO of my manga, from now on. Yep. o:
So, enjoy. > > I hope!
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SO FAR:
THE WAREHOUSE:
PROLOGUE:
Pres--> Page 1A: http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1528339/ <-- You are here. ^-^
Next--> Page 1B: http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1528342/
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© 2007 TARA-LYNN SHARROCK
Comments
haohaohayashi Says:
i only hav one suggestion, ur sudden birds-eye view in the bottom right panel is a bit misleading o_O i thot it was a girl clinging to a guy kissing him as he was walking.....yeah my mistake xp started to wonder even more when she said "my son" ya know?
ForeverxDrowning Says:
^^ Oooh! Yay ^^ Love it! And the birds eye view is pretty awkward looking- heh- I don't know what it is... maybe because it is so straight vertically it makes it look like the boy lying down is walking
Christie Says:
thanks for give me the direction
its so nice !