She sleeps, My Angel

by Dark Larva

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She sleeps, My Angel

And off to bed my angel doth sleep and dream of sweet mornings to come,
for one day I may sing to her of my love I keep with out such pains of restraint,
with a smile upon her face and the warm feelings within her heart she rests.

How I wish to bring her such joys in life and see her smile with grace,
for she is my secret, my love divine that brings me joy and inspiration,
my muse unbound that sing sonnets that only I can hear, but perhaps I am fooling myself.

And so in secret I hold my tongue and tell her not of my love,
to stand back and watch her spread her wings and soar within the clouds,
and once again I see her sleep, in peace with she doth rest.

Perhaps, may perhaps I will find the strength to tell her what lays in my heart.
> 'Battle Gynoid Ver.2 & Kip!' by Dark Larva

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Nov 5th 2007
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free free verse love narrative romance verse
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So I was once a poet at one time writing freely with no set rhythm, meter or rhyme. I would not say I am good or the best, but I like to express myself. I apologize if it is not to your liking or taste or if I am a terrible poet, but please if you have any comments I do accept them freely.

Comments

Zlady Says:

You don't have to say sorry for thinking you're a bad poet =] If it makes you feel better then write it.
And it's a lovely poem, by the way!

vampire Miyu Says:

cool poem
kinda deep too

Smiling Devil Says:

I like the poem, it's full emotion. But I've to tell you that this gets a lot better with the right punctuation^^. If you fix that it'll be much easier for others to read!

gothgirl666 Says:

really good

2401PenitentTangent Says:

Holy shit, enjoy your frontpage, man :D

mercury yume Says:

why do you use the word 'doth'? What purpose does it serve?