Calling Down the Storm

by Koyuki

in Completed Works

< 'MoonSinger' by Koyuki

Calling Down the Storm

Lovely, lonely, listless, lost,
The Queen of Twilight,
Lady Frost,

Singing, searching, shaking, sundered,
Walked the ramparts; the storm
thundered.

Dancing, daring, drifting, doffs,
Her bare skin pale,
Stormlit,

Whispers, wistful, wonders, warm,
Lady Aleana called down
the Storm.
> 'Kiera' by Koyuki

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Nov 2nd 2007
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angst ballad dark and horror frost lady listless lonely lost lovely narrative narrative nature queen spiritual stanza story three twilight
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It's a story. If you ignore the first line of each stanza, it actually reads fairly coheisively, too. It becomes:

"The Queen of Twilight, Lady frost, wandered the ramparts; the storm thundered. Her bare skin pale, stormlit, Lady Aleana called down the storm."

Credit for the picture: This one is actually mine, so don't get after me on this. Credits for the stock used to create it are in the submission.

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Grape juice Says:

Oh very neat! Good job, I really like the alliteration

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Gartenian Princess Says:

mm, two poems in one are ~always~ fun. I do have to say it's lovely(the story)...and the poem, in fact...the alliteration deffinitly does add, you can feel the snow and life in the poem more. very nice, as usual.

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