Sketch: The Baroness Alice

Reposting this because her face was driving me insane.. i made it too long.. so i took out my sketch.. fixed it.. and now im resubmitting

to restate was was posted with the origninal sketch (In hopefully a shorter way) i recently joined the rule of rose club here at sheezy.. rule of rose is a creepy game (made for the playstation) that was banned in several countries because of it's content >.> to put it compactly, the story is about an orphanage of kids that have created a make believe society called the red crayon society.. or.. the aristocrat club... they make up these insane rules in the way children often do, and require a monthly tribute... but these kids have taken it one step farther and have gone from innocent play to torture, and sometimes murder as a price to pay for not playing along with them... anyways.. i joined the sheezy club because i love the game and was instantly nominated to Baroness (in the game the club has varying rankings.. the higher you are on the list.. the better for your livelihood).. and i decided to sketch my rule of rose "persona" a girl whom i've now dubbed alice. a) because its an old fashioned name.. and b) because its my real middlename it was fitting. I'm hoping to ink and cg this picture at a later date