Dark Kid

by Stella Blade

in Completed Works

Dark Kid

Nobody likes me
Everyone thinks I‘m a freak
Always call me strange
Every time when they see me in the street.

But why is it always me?
Why am I so bad to them?
Even my family
They hate me and it‘s hard to say.

Lonely without friends
Sitting on the roof
Why there isn‘t any chance
To forget the truth?

Questions are killing from inside
Did I hurt somebody?
Fear in my eyes almost died
I don‘t feel so lucky.

What did I wrong?
Help me understand
Bad is I can‘t be strong
People want to see me dead.

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Oct 27th 2007
Tags:
family human nature poetry
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just read
but that poem isn't about me

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Harkimbo Says:

Sad poem :(
But please don't die
I don't know you al to long
But still I would cry

Because you already seemed
To be so nice
When I saw you 'watched' me
For me that was a surprise

And please know
That you're not a freak
No matter how you look
The inner beauty, is what people should seak.

And in my opinion
You have a lot of that
You showed it me
By the things you said

So I want to be
A friend to you
It may be on distance
That is the least I can do.

And as I hope
you now know
I like you as a friend
So please, don't go

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Please don't let the basterds and bitches get to you. You seem to be a great girl. And no matter how you look, your inside counts. I wish I could do more then be a friend on distance, but I'm here for you.

Ruby Carbuncle Says:

Now I know why Gaara is on this pic
it's about him isn't it?
love it as I like Gaara and give respect to him

suri Says:

hey! dont let jerks get ya! >< the world is full of them , specially institute & high school, but live! life's cool, maybe not now, maybe not next year.. but if u travel u'll see there's great ppl (i lov Canada, but i have to say that north america is full of idiots, specially USA .. and they call it the freedom land..¬¬)

well, you know blabla... if u need to talk here i am ^^

anb btw i dont think a "freak" could write this poem

blackhurt17 Says:

nice poem
il like tghe way you rhyme
its quite original