Sorry

by KakaFan

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< I wish

Sorry

The night was quiet with only the sound the crickets' laugh, the repetitive clatter of the pencil in my hand, and her cries that seemed to have hummed in her thought. “I'm sorry”, I thought in my head. “I'm sorry”, and deep down inside I was crying too.
> 'Michi' by KakaFan

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Oct 25th 2007
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experimental family kakafan literature poetry sorry spiritual urban youth
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Well this is one of my leads for a thing I'm writing in school so I hope u like it

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xXmikuruXx Says:

LOVE it! So deep! Is it for your memior?

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Whisper to the Wind Says:

Awsome poem. You can feel how deep it is. Loved it