We were not ment to be

by freelancer

in Completed Works

< 'pvt. fuzzytail' by freelancer

We were not ment to be

as the darkness closes in
as the cold settles
i lay on the floor
lost in memories of you
i am sick of your lies
sick of the way you talked about me...
behind my back
im sick of this pain you put me through
im sick of you
i loved you...you hated me
i cuddled you...you ignored me
but now i see
that you and me...
were not ment to be

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Oct 19th 2007
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hey there, here is a poem
but first i would like to say i am not emo, these poems just come to me
but i hope you like it ==

Comments

monicachaloupka Says:

i like this, good job^^

martysexylegs Says:

i like this and i know what this feels like cuz im going thru it right now and it sucks major ass!

Nanook Says:

Yeah, I wouldn't bother with punctuation or spellcheck.
They're obviously beneath you, and your "emotional depth."
And it's not as though writing has, I don't know, rules, or anything.

stereokinetic Says:

Time Taken: 10-15min
Ah never mind. Dead horse.

likes2laugh Says:

you and me were meant to be papi lol xD man i love how you can make your peoms so deep! mine always rhyme and have something to do with something...ehhh delightful i guess