Not to be mean, but your a little too self resound, try to think about other people when you write it gets boring to read these things.It's all on big pity party... Which gets old, sure life sucks, and when you like someone you want them to notice you, that's not really the way to go about being noticed. If you want to be noticed in life, you have to try to be appealing, if your "fat" (which I think is bs) well try going on walks, eat better food etc. If you have achie well it'll go away when your older, and if you dress as a goth, put down the black cloths grab some jeans and a darkest none logo, lace free shirt or what ever and you'll beokay. :"D And just remember you have friends no matter if your aware of it or not, and I bet you plenty smart so you'll get a great guy sooner or later, and you'll be noticed when the time is right. Trust me, now is the time to prepare for life and to look ahead for the futures great comings, if not for you no one else will do it for you. So look outward towards the future and just tackle one day at a time, you can do it and your friends will be there for you always....
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POPAROCKA Says:
Not to be mean, but your a little too self resound, try to think about other people when you write it gets boring to read these things.It's all on big pity party...
Which gets old, sure life sucks, and when you like someone you want them to notice you, that's not really the way to go about being noticed. If you want to be noticed in life, you have to try to be appealing, if your "fat" (which I think is bs) well try going on walks, eat better food etc. If you have achie well it'll go away when your older, and if you dress as a goth, put down the black cloths grab some jeans and a darkest none logo, lace free shirt or what ever and you'll beokay. :"D And just remember you have friends no matter if your aware of it or not, and I bet you plenty smart so you'll get a great guy sooner or later, and you'll be noticed when the time is right. Trust me, now is the time to prepare for life and to look ahead for the futures great comings, if not for you no one else will do it for you. So look outward towards the future and just tackle one day at a time, you can do it and your friends will be there for you always....
Elzie Says:
PopaRocka01045 Has a very nice comment...
I like it anyway. mememe poems aren't selfish, they're a relief and fun to write. eat that!