baby bloody foot prints

by LoserAndProud

in Completed Works

< po3mz

baby bloody foot prints

their bodies hang from the ceiling
the blood runs down their legs like rain
it creates a pool of blood on the floor

their 2 year old baby girl crawls over to the pool
she walks through it like its water
should someone take her away
should they make her stop

maybe the baby is just saying goodbye in her own way
what would you do?
> sorry

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Oct 18th 2007
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baby blood family
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The Red Guy 25 Says:

Not the best poetry I've ever read. You've kinda gotta work on your "flow."

Although it's a neat poem that could almost have some symbolism behind it. Is there any?