Death of the World

by kaill armitage

in Works in Progress

Death of the World

My life ended, on that cold clear night. My heart was pierced, and I died. On that night, my last breath was drawn, but I was saved. He saved me, but at a terrible cost. Every breath I take in, making me feel the pollution, the corruption, the lack of life. My life was saved, but the world I am in, is lifeless. There are no birds in the sky, no children in the streets, no people in the cars. Everything vanished that night, that night two years ago when my heart was pierced by the Tarow, the beings that no inhabit the planet. Maybe I should start from the beginning.
My name is Tara, Tara Wever, and I am just an ordinary 16 year old girl. Every day is the same, I get up and ready for school. Cassie picks me up, and we idly chat and laugh on the half hour drive to school. We are the outcasts at our school, befriended by few, but our friendship is strong. That day was like any other day really, except for one thing, I woke up late.

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Oct 16th 2007
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Alright, I finally felt up to writing, and I plan to work on this one plenty more. This one I just randomly thought up and thought of a title, so without further ado, Death of the World.

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Redsun Says:

So far it sounds great. Would love to read more. I guess this was not to much to read at the moment. hehe... My eyes are not burning now so I read it and like I said it sounds great.

Tiomara Says:

YAY! MUST READ MORE

winkette Says:

Wooooot! Sounds awsome! Can't wait to read more! *waits*

Jisatsu Kudamono Says:

This does sound great!!
... so ... when can I pick up your novel