I wrote this for an upcoming creative writing meeting I'm attending. Our challenge was to take a song title or song lyrics and build a poem or short story around it. The lyrics from the song "Holland, 1945" by Neutral Milk Hotel are in quotations.
This is an experimental sort of poem. I've put in 4 or 5 reccuring rhymes. However, I haven't given them a specific pattern. They're peppered throughout the poem. (I don't know if there's a name for this sort of poem or not.) I've also made an attempt at dichotomization which is somewhat untraditional through ultra-vivid imagery. Hopefully, I've pulled this off.
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Fitos Says:
tassy, tassy... Fully against my views, this one. Too many of the darn clichés here.. unless they are sarcastic/ironic.