SMILE =D

by Shuya

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Description

Oct 12th 2007
Tags:
abstract experimental fbf human smile
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My first attempt at FBF animation...

Not that great

Advanced critique encouraged!!

Comments

Quimera Says:

not bad at all for your first fbf. You can work on moving your keyframes so the smile can ease more. The eyebrows bounce too much too, looks like you wanted to make the transition of the expression moving the eyebrows up and down, but looks kinda weird. The nose is fine except the last frame were the movement is too critical, instead of easing.

Whipper Snapper Says:

Really nice style. But the eyes should get smaller instead of bigger as the smile forms.