You gave me life

by Harkimbo

in Completed Works

You gave me life

You gave me a life
You gave me a smile
Now you’re gone
And I’m crying for some while

I loved your smile
I loved your eyes
Now I just guess
They were just lies

The words you said
The love you gave
Now you don’t talk to me
And you’re as silent as a grave

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Oct 10th 2007
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angst cry heart journal lies life live love romance
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I made this poem a few months ago, and it shows how deep the love for my ex was/ is, Because I made it 4months after she broke up with me. In the meanwhile my ex got a new bf and I lost my heart over seas. So I guess I should train my swimming

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Buttkickingphantom Says:

I'm sorry for your loss

monicachaloupka Says:

i'm sorry Harm...

Total Chaos Says:

very deep...

Dark Faerie Aleu Says:

*burst out into tears* I'm terribly sorry! I feel just aweful. No one deserves this kind of love.