Gaara should understand......

by CaitinValen

in Misc Writings

Gaara should understand......

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Kankuro: every day he wonders.

Temari: every day he tries.

Kankuro: every day he ponders-

both: about what life is like through our eyes

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Kankuro: Why doesn't he look to me?

Temari: he tries to find answers.

Kankuro: why doesn't he see?

Temari: he searches for answers.

Kankuro: when will he find them?

Temari: he searches the skies.

Kankuro: When he searches-

both: he lets time pass.

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Kankuro: he knows the secrets-

Temari: about you and I.

Kankuro: he has the time-

both: to figure out why!

Temari: he just can't see-

Kankuro: with his mortal eyes-

Temari: why almost every day-

both: someone dies!

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Temari: Living alone, with no friends-

Kankuro: he had us, but he even said

Temari: "don't even bother with me-"

both: "our relation-ships will soon end."

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Kankuro: he thought he-

Temari: was the only one.

Kankuro: the lonliest of us three-

both: who couldn't have fun.

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Kankuro: people stared at us-

Temari: because of him.

Kankuro: our possesed little brother-

both: who killed on a lifelong whim.

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Kankuro: they stared at us-

Temari: everyone in the town.

Kankuro: they called us monsters-

both: all year 'round.

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Kankuro: he says he's alone-

Temari: but he never has been.

Kankuro: He talks on the phone-

both: to people not of his kin.

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Kankuro: he is the Kaze-Kage, who works with villagers-

Temari: to solve problems during the days-

Kankuro: and help them fix errors-

both: to change their ways.

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Kankuro: now that Shukkaku is possesing him no longer-

Temari: the villagers look at him-

Kankuro: but don't even ponder-

Temari: why his lifelong whim-

both: ended when he was younger.

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Kankuro: Loneliness is something he knows no more.

Temari: only you and I can understand-

Kankuro: this feeling of mental torture-

both: in the Village hidden in the Sand.

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Oct 8th 2007
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angst experimental gaara kankuro temari
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I unno, I am sad that someone or sheezyart deleted half of my pics, so I started writing, and this is what I was writing........

this is the best poem I've ever put together D:

Kankuro, Temari, Gaara (c) Kishimoto Masashi

Comments

AQ Says:

I feel really bad for you.

Become So Numb Says:

Wow, this is really great!

Zenith Astra Says:

i love it. i love the rhymes. but i don't think they had phones back when Naruto takes place

Furya Says:

lovely poem.very beautiful

blackness Says:

*Cries for gaara* So pretty and sad! *hugs gaara*

WonderingWisher Says:

Wow. That's amazingly well done.

GaaraLover2011 Says:

I found you! It's Awesome
! Depressing, but really cool!

Lil Chrono Says:

wow, you should continue writing! this is pretty sweet!

spiketay Says:

OHH GAARA I"M SO SORRY