You seriously need to apply more style and an image-concious mindset to your animation. It had it's moment,
But
-Use a more fun font
-Better music taste, sync action with music
-Don't show him killing two people and then zoom out to show like ten dead bodies
-Try a bit harder
But overall the message is clear that you have potential.
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Whipper Snapper Says:
You seriously need to apply more style and an image-concious mindset to your animation. It had it's moment,
But
-Use a more fun font
-Better music taste, sync action with music
-Don't show him killing two people and then zoom out to show like ten dead bodies
-Try a bit harder
But overall the message is clear that you have potential.
Scav Says:
Pretty good..gif "Nudge nudge, wink wink ;)")
doondeka Says:
cool
Wolsk Says:
Awesome.
WAATTT nice