How is it? -poem-

by THeiNSaNePaiNTeR

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How is it? -poem-

How is it?

How is it that when you love someone, they choose not to believe you?
How is it that when friends need help, most people will make it worse with their opinions?
How is it that people do not talk about how they feel, even when talking makes it better?
How is it that a great day can turn horrible with just one comment or action?
How is it that today could have turned into such a mess, even when it was going fine?
How is it that many people’s words can hurt more then they could ever know?
How is it that people can not understand some simple things as heart, love, and humility?

What is wrong with today? What is wrong with the world and lives of others?
Is it the human element that destroys this all?
-And-
How is it that no one can do anything about it?
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Description

Oct 4th 2007
Tags:
free verse poem
Views:
117
Comments:
8
Score:
1
Favorites:
4
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today sucks
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Comments

toraqueen Says:

This is actually pretty good Chris.

SkiBabeShortieLovesU Says:

I'm so sorry.
I do love you chrisy & i know you love me.
2day was fine, im sorry i ruined it.
i want to talk to you, but im affraid when i talk itll sound bad & make me sound like bad person....as like i wish i could relex about more things....when i just take things to a level thats unnessiary. im sorry sweetie. I Love you, from the bottom of my Heart

SotoxUchiha Says:

thats good... you get a fav...

penguin MAN Says:

Well put me in a dress and call me louise, that was deep 0_0

SotoxUchiha Says:

your on front page!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

joe2587 Says:

Wow, this is a great poem. Dont really comment or fave poems, but this one takes the cake. you expressed it in which people cant comprehend, its sad on what really goes on. And I so can relate to this .

Tinuke Angel Says:

pretty good little man....sounds like how i have been feeling lately

Makavelli Says:

very emo. I can see why it was on the front page.