The Whore Boy

by Broken Wing Angel

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Description

Sep 29th 2007
Tags:
boy concept crow human japanese portrait sad
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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WANTED!

FINALLY!! something worth putting up!! I've been working on this for months now but its done ITS FINALLY DONE! *dies*

He's a whore boy in Gion with all the geisha... except he lives in the red light district. He doesn't speak and hasn't spoken to anyone ever since his mother was killed when he was three. He gets beat by the mother of the okiya that he lives/works in and she also likes to saw off his hair branches. Just..... depressing :(

A big thank you to http://rache-engel.deviantart.com/ for his consent!! !!!

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Materials: Prismacolor markers and pencils
Time: two months

Comments

Dominique Says:

I love the pose and the coloring.

Embeth Says:

Beautiful job As far as constructive criticism goes, the only thing I might be able to suggest has to do with the stomach. The deep shadows of the bottom of the ribcage indicate him being extremely thin, as in to the point of unhealthily so, but his sides are kind of wide if he is that thin. It's still gorgeous, though

Psychokookiefreak Says:

yay ^^ *has.... semi-watched this come to life*

PrinceHassan Says:

This is very, very beautiful! I love the coloring, and his eyes are just...incredible!
The only thing that seems a bit off to me are his legs, otherwise, great job!