My Friends' Parents HATE ME!

by TomaMoto

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Mature Sep 29th 2007
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ari cliff comedy comedy friends hate mazer parents stand-up zorak
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So this was my first experiment at a improvised stand up comedy. The stories are all true, and I think they're funny, but I need to work on the delivery. I definitely noticed a lot of "umm"s and "you know"s in there, which is pretty unprofessional, but at least this is giving me practice.

Maybe next time I try one of these, I'll rehearse it several times before I record instead of going cold turkey. Either that or I'll actually write down a list points to touch on, but that seems less fair since live comedians usually don't have the luxury of having their notes in front of them. That is a luxury reserved almost exclusively for VO artists =D.

Do enjoy. I hope you guys can get a laugh or two out of it.

Comments

sadsadDOG Says:

it was funnie...but gawd...that must've been awful as a kid xD

Yuu Tan Says:

you are a god. Teach me T.T

Kay san Says:

"A pain in my ass!" Awesome delivery. That cracked me up. All stammers and 'ums' aside (don't worry, I wouldn't do any better) it was pretty funny. True stories make the best comedy.

Hellucard Says:

Funny man

Shadowii2 Says:

No wonder why I get amazed about your voice acting every time

calculon000 Says:

You may think it's "Unprofessional", but it is what it was supposed to be, a story told by a normal person. Rehearsing it wouldn't really do anything for that I think.

Man Go tailS Says:

THE GIANT TURD STORY AMUSED ME..... ONLY BECAUSE I CAN RELATED. LMFAO.

freelancer Says:

LMAO LMAO LMAO
funny!

XSilverMoonlightX Says:

ROLF!
AHAHHAHAHAHA FUNNYY!
FAV!

sim1pdrc1 Says:

that is hilarious