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Meaningless
I can't write a poem, so I'll start with a word.
A word, a word.
It's meaningless I know, but a word none the less.
I can't draw a picture, so I'll start with a line.
A line, a line.
It's meaningless I know, but a line none the less.
I can't tell you anything, so I'll start with hello.
Hello, hello.
It's meaningless I know, but hello none the less.
I can't tell the truth, so I'll start with a lie.
A lie, a lie.
It's meaningless I know, but a lie none the less.
I can't be a friend, so I'll start with nothing.
Nothing, nothing.
It's meaningless I know, but nothing none the less.
I can't think anymore, so I'll start with dying.
Dying, dying.
It's meaningless I know, but I'm dying none the less.
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Comments
Sanchu Says:
You did very well and it had a good meaning
you did great but you've always been an amazing poet. 
EmoHeart Says:
do you think maybe it would flow a little better to say
I can't think anymore, so I'll end with dying.
??
Just a thought.
VERY strong piece. I really like it.
Good work!
-Ashley