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Let me love you
Tell me you love me
Let me stay were I need to be
Hold me in your arms and close your eyes
Let me pray this hour never dies
Rest your head against mine
Let our fingers intertwine
Press your lips to my cheek
Let me lay my head to your shoulder when I’m weak
Kiss my hand and smile
Let me touch your hair and stare at you all the while
Wear the symbol of my love with pride
Let me promise that the feeling I have with you I’ll never hide
Take my embrace whenever you need
Let me insure that for you I would bleed
Take both my hands too
And let me say “I love you”
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Comments
EmoHeart Says:
I would honestly love to see this as a song.
Put something in as a chorus-thought, and stick with it.
I'd change the "need/bleed" rhyme, simply because it seems a more... dreamy piece, and blood doesn't really... suit that. It kind of bumps the flow of the piece as a whole.
I REALLLLY like this.
Amazing work.
-Ashley