I wrote this poem in memory to a loved one that my family lost in the 9-11 attack, Vanessa, and in memory to the heroes of that day.
Everything (c) me
P.S. Sorry about Vanessa's picture...it is the only one my family has and my stupid-ass brothers stuck stick pins in her head...
Comments
Ozzyturtle123 Says:
I'm so sorry for your lost. That was a beautiful poem.
mercury yume Says:
quite lovely, good work with consistent metaphor. The line 'These metal hawks was carried our loved ones' is grammatically incorrect, but besides that I don't really have an qualms with this, it's nicely sombre.