The Island

Description

Sep 7th 2007

Tags:: coffee concept concept landscape landscape and scenery paintings scenery
Views:: 210
Comments:: 15
Score:: 24
Favorites:: 37

Been doing a lot of landscapes lately it seems, owell I need to practice.

Crits and Comments are

Edit: I used custom cloud brushes that I didn't create. I regret that I do not remember who did, I would just like to clarify that I am not taking credit for creating these cloud brushes. If you recognize these as your clouds please let me know so I can give you proper credit.

The Island (c) Coffee
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Comments

Izar Says:

I really like the deep vibrant colour here.
However... The hut's look a little like they were "glued" onto the scenery, and I can't fully make out that mountains structure.

icemai Says:

omg, oh my gooooosh, that's so beautiful, I wouldn't mind having one hut there on the beach the colors are so... so aaaalivee amasing ^^

Megara Says:

this is a beautiful sight
The colors are so vivid and alive like icemai said, its really well done, omg ,really!

Koiyu Says:

OMFG!! OMG! I can't beleive u do landscapes! OMEGoSHHHH! I really think it's good! but more detail would be nice.

Sandcastle Says:

The most vibrant colours and details for all your three landscape work here!

I agree with Izar on the huts and mountain, there's an issue with depth and structure for this piece. None of huts are casting ground shadows, and mountains feels like a cut-out. One way to solve this issue, I think, is to add more shadows and contrast until it looks right. The 'details' you need are the shadowy and distance-helping ones.

Hope the above helped, Imma gonna fave this piece anyway. Bravo!!