On a serious note, mmm, delicious dark poetry. I was beginning to miss it. I actually don't have any critiques this time. Alas, I'm also lacking in interpretation, but know that I enjoy it.
Now, pardon. My tongue will be stuck to the monitor. ~licklicklick~ Mmm, tasty literature.
Hmm I like the concept but I think it kind of sounds like you wanted each and every word to rhyme, like that was your priority instead of focussing on the poetry and rythm in it itself.
Most enjoyable (and Vee is not FIRST, she only THINKS she's first. I'm really first but fashionably late.) I love poems that rhyme, do not ask me why but they just seem to click with my mind.
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skinnyvee Says:
I'M FIRST!
Merina Says:
anyhow O.o that's an odd poem you got there
skinnyvee Says:
On a serious note, mmm, delicious dark poetry. I was beginning to miss it. I actually don't have any critiques this time. Alas, I'm also lacking in interpretation, but know that I enjoy it.
Now, pardon. My tongue will be stuck to the monitor. ~licklicklick~ Mmm, tasty literature.
Phibi Says:
so amazing...
it's so... amazing and cool
love it very much
you made very awesome poem
impressive
JelmerBV Says:
Nice ^^
JelmerBV Says:
OMG FP ALREADY...
vampire Miyu Says:
I thinks it's a kinda odd poem
please don't hate me!*runs for cover*
I don't really know why but I still like it
Sue Zooey Says:
Hmm I like the concept but I think it kind of sounds like you wanted each and every word to rhyme, like that was your priority instead of focussing on the poetry and rythm in it itself.
HakuCordero Says:
Well... I can see why it was put on the front page
I really don't know what my thoughts on it are, though... soz
Kerrigore Says:
Most enjoyable (and Vee is not FIRST, she only THINKS she's first. I'm really first but fashionably late.) I love poems that rhyme, do not ask me why but they just seem to click with my mind.