IT CAN GET DEEPER THAN: "NOW THAT YOU'RE GONE" AND "I FEEL SO ALONE", DAMN YOU.
It's not that the things aren't technically poems... it's just that... sad emo (I just can't think of another word to describe it, I'm sorry) poems are too easy to write. I don't feel it, teens and their poems. It just feels played out.
Let me know what you think.
Comments
unwritten Says:
Wow makes me ashame of my poems now!
chimera 99 Says:
Thats awesome
I like your rhymes
XxSariaxX Says:
damn your good *nods*
MissGreysAnatomy Says:
Ahh, this is so true. You really have a way with words!
Pierre Says:
CRAWLING IN MAI SKIN?
Rorshak Says:
Well written and well spoken. I enjoyed listening.
chaosflare Says:
Wow, this is really good. I love the wordishness of it. RYUIJI-SAMA IS EMO!!!!!!!!!! Oo
Void of Rapture Says:
lol i love you nao pls
iibun Says:
Good gracious this is amazing. The words, the rhythm, and the wonderful way your voice gave it all life. . .nothing less than art
jambii Says:
dude i don't care when this was submitted, I LOVE THIS/you and i had to comment lolwut