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Aug 29th 2007
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See what happens when you get to cocky about thing?
The next thing you do is crap! xD

Anyway! I truely hate how this came out! x_x
I mean...Moonstar came out fine, and that's the only reason I'm posting this, but look at Ember!
Her nose is too steep and she looks kinda stiff. And it doesn't even look like they are looking at each other...it looks like they are looking behind one another.

I was going to make it all faded and in the background say: "Like Mother, Like Daugther" but I can't do the fadin' thing too well, so I let it at this.

Advice please!

ElfQuest (c) Richard and Wendy Pini
Art & Moonstar (c) [puppetofdarknes]

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darknessofgothness Says:

ok! kurayami has advice for you! whoa..i just talked in 3rd person. 0_0 anyway! the only reason(well that i can notice) that it looks like they are look passed each other is because of the eyes. the eyes are looking straight ahead and because of the height difference you need to adjust where the eyes are looking. since Moonstar is shorter than Ember you need to make Moonstar's eyes look up towards Ember and since Ember is taller than Moonstar you need to make it so that Ember's eyes are looking down upon Moonstar.
umm...i hope that made sense.

TamashiiKitara123 Says:

I think it's pretty! At least you can use photoshop!