MOAR MUSICS FOR YOU
this is part 2 of http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1388201/
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woo.
playing around with songwriting and such.
this is a super-short edit.
more later.
woo.
LYRICS:
This is something i've needed to say
will you write my words on your wrist with a razorblade
please no i'll make this all okay
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i've wasted
your time
i've lived
a lie
and now
i need
to tell
the truth.
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i'm trying i swear
to be honest, sincere
but ive been lying so long
i've forgotten the truth
hurting you was the last
thing i wanted to do
now you listen to me
i'm coming clean
spilling my guts
don't you spill yours for me
don't spill blood for me
(END LYRICS)
TREMBLE AS YOU BEHOLD MY METAPHORS
MWAHAHA
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EDIT!
Revamped the drums. that shit was wizzeak
Comments
Merina Says:
It sounds pretty nice, but I have one thing to say. If you did the very beginning solo's the small tiny things through the music (at 0.11). They sound a tad sloppy. You should work on those =3 The rest sounds pretty good to me. So keep up the good work!
keicho Says:
ooh i can definitely feel the esp here, so heavy that i feel my guts are moving, good stuff!!
Elfofchaos Says:
nice music man, got anyone doing vocals for it yet? I'd be happy to oblige if a ya need any.
Alias Anonymous Says:
Man, I don't know how you write and re-write songs so fast! If I hear vocals on this, I'll be so amazed beyond belief. I wish I could make my stuff sound that professional. My music just doesn't have that...THUMP!
Good luck with the Vox!