When sailing through the valley,
listening to the music of the stream flowing,
how I wished you were here.
when walking on the carpet of autumn leaves,
through the jungle of pines,
how I wished you were here.
When watching the golden rays
coming through trees,
how I wished you were here.
When sitting here looking at
the stars, talking to them,
how I wished you were here.
© "Laks"
Don't listen... "Feel"
I based this tranquil song on the above poem and a piece of art (preview image) which inspired me
. I didn't want to over do it, so I stuck with the Piano and the Strings, so it isn't overpowering. I'm quite happy the way it turned out, the Piano especially. Let me know what you think!
Thanks for checking out my music and thanks to the commenters/favers/voters.
Fox.
[Music © Fox Amoore.]
[Preview image © Starfinder.]
[Poem © Laks.]
Comments
Merina Says:
le beautiful.
20thcore Says:
thats pretty touching man! :) you shouldn't worry about it being overpowering. its a nice composition. your piano skills are really good too. your work really inspires me to try something new all the time.
Darkstalker X Says:
Grabs the SOUL! glad to have heard it, man.
Super Mushroom Says:
good stuff now add a drum and bass beat to it
Backwards Twin 2 Says:
Oh wow... Beautiful...I can't wait till this is up for download
ZealzHeal Says:
Dude....that was beautiful. It brought me out of my pissed of mood when I heard it, thank you for that.
Zineb Says:
Awesome performance on the piano! The way you dealed with the strings make the song full of pure feelings.
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(And if I were a mod I would feature this piece
SallyMusic Says:
Absolutely beautiful
AniMeowzerz Says:
The melody is very touching, you could end up losing yourself in Nostalgia. (I hope I'm using that word in the right sense D: ) It makes me think of happy times, all the laughs and cries I've had. I love it, favourited and YES'd.