This is my newest drawing, it dates from 21 July as you can see
I know, I'm not THAT productive but I'm trying to be more. My boyfriend forced me to submit this here, so blame him! No, just kidding. I thought it would be a good idea to submit this, since I don't totally hate it.
It's a random bunny girl I drew and she looks a bit like my previous fursona(Jelai) except for the fact she's not a bunny with blonde hair and brown eyes. (I'm talking about clothing style, the colors of the fur and ears etc.)
Likes: I like the outfit a lot, I made it up myself and I used my favourite colors: red and black! I also love the fur color, it's a good brown, yay! ^^ I like the way I did her body and hands too, I'm pretty satisfied with them.
Dislikes: I hate the fact you can't see the red pants are actually RED. They look like a strange, ugly pink color... I also dislike the head(which I always do), I'll work on that. More things I don't like are the shape of the eyes and the face, to me it looks rather boring. The hair doesn't look good either. I tried really long on it and it still sucks.
Things to work on: The head, the hair, the eyes and face.
My characters always look so dead, I never give them real expressions on their 'introduction' drawings, but unfortunately most of my characters haven't got more drawings...
Critiques are SO welcome!
Comments
IamDarkElf Says:
The shading isn't to bad. But the eye inking seems a little to thick but not enough to throw the drawing off. I can see that you make the outermost lines a lot thicker than the inner lines. This okay but the outer lines are just a little too thick. Your drawing skills are really good but, like everyone, you seem to be struggling with hands. My best advise to this is to sit down with a peice of paper and a pencil. Hold your hand out behind you and stare at it. Draw your hand with out looking at the paper. Don't look at the paper until you are completely done. Do this long enough and you will improve. Overall the drawing is really good. I hope this is the kind of critique you want.
ikiri Says:
Her clavicle is too high and kind of misplaced. If I remember correctly, it starts above the sternum and connects to your shoulder blades. I could be wrong though, but I think it'll help to just have an anatomy book on hand as reference. I only have a general sense of anatomy, haha, but I seem to always remember the clavicle from my own reference book
You don't have to do this, but it might be a good idea to try and incorporate some personality in concept drawings, whether it's just an expression or a certain pose. It'll help in giving 'life' to the more formal drawings 
I think it might be because it tends to be misplaced quite a bit.
Composition wise, her body pose looks a little stiff and awkward, but I guess that's what happens when you're just doing a concept sketch, huh?
While I agree the lineart for the eyes look misplaced, I think they're awesome. They remind me of jokers for some reason, haha. But I think it'd've been nifty if they fit in more with the picture. That might take some line width and use experimentation. But I think this is nifty. I also like the connector thingy for the fishnets and her shirt. I'm not sure why, but I really like that part of the design