Push Me

by Victraelle

in Completed Works

Push Me

Come near
It’s not so much a need
As a want
But my wants are close
To needs
When it comes to this.
I don’t want to let go
And the past is not yet
Far enough to move on.
Maybe
If you pushed me
I could fall on my knees
And teach myself to stand.
vV""VIC""Vv

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Aug 12th 2007
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Do it.

Comments

eibhlin Says:

wow, I like that it is so simple and to the point
that and it is something I can completely relate to
well written!

skinnyvee Says:

In its simplicity, it's a raw, inherent sentiment that a lot of people could relate to. I'm one of those.

It does make me concerned, though.