Down on the ground!!!!? he screamed.
?Shoot me.?
?She?s gunna kill us all!? a panicking woman whispered.
The man half turned toward them. ?Quiet!!!? He shot at the ceiling again. He turned back towards the girl, and she was right in his face.
?Shoot me,? she said again.
He backed up a little. ?What are you?? Suddenly, Kara was behind him, her hand over his heart.
?You?re worst nightmare,? she whispered, and gave him a slight shock. Not enough to kill him, mind, you, but enough to stun him. That was all she needed. She grabbed his machine gun, smiling, and faced the people, who were starting to get up.
?Down on the ground, everyone.? She shot at the ceiling, and smiled. ?I don?t miss twice, campers.?
Comments
RIPPL3R Says:
you have rookies eye... *takes gun*
nice expression and pose :3
Rehn Adair Says:
awesome, i had something similar.
Down on the ground!!!!? he screamed.
?Shoot me.?
?She?s gunna kill us all!? a panicking woman whispered.
The man half turned toward them. ?Quiet!!!? He shot at the ceiling again. He turned back towards the girl, and she was right in his face.
?Shoot me,? she said again.
He backed up a little. ?What are you?? Suddenly, Kara was behind him, her hand over his heart.
?You?re worst nightmare,? she whispered, and gave him a slight shock. Not enough to kill him, mind, you, but enough to stun him. That was all she needed. She grabbed his machine gun, smiling, and faced the people, who were starting to get up.
?Down on the ground, everyone.? She shot at the ceiling, and smiled. ?I don?t miss twice, campers.?
LadyEvermyst Says:
Blow his brains out
heheh i like the lines you added on it for shadow 
Shutaboy Says:
He won't be able to hit anything shakeing like that.
StarBomber109 Says:
He reminds me of Killy for some odd reason...
But pretty cool regardless!
JellyFish Says:
NUuuuuu! Don't kill meh!!!!
Wait...he can't kill me...can he?
Hehe! Awesome work on the blood! For some strange reason...I really like his mouth
zombieplasticclock Says:
Oh yeah!? Well I have a Plank with a nail in i-BLAM!
heh, yeah. The kid reminds me of the Young Vash the Stampede from Trigun.
Very clever coloring (black & white with red blood), great picture, just all around great job
Teacher Izumi Says:
this is freakin awesome!
gayemoriot Says:
i just realized that i havent commented any of your work in forever and a day
so yeah
im doing that now
this peice rocks of course
i love his expression and the story behind the picture
pictures need stories to be understood
swell job
swell job..