love with your mate

by badgirl9900

in Completed Works

love with your mate

This world is great
when u have a mate
when i see his face
i know we have a case
i have a lover which
is better then the other
but he needs a shower
in an hour
the best can
have the rest
but can never
have a lover
as freash as
the hour

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Aug 7th 2007
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love romance
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this is my first poem so it's old
i never knew i was going to be like my dad
anyway please tell me if it's good or bad

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PokeyStix Says:

You should refrain from writing out poems in chatspeak.