It's All Over Now

by Axel seme

in Completed Works

It's All Over Now

It’s All Over Now

Angelic blankets of snow fall around me
As I first meet eyes with you.
You come over to me of free will
Which makes me wonder why.

Six months later,
You smile only for me
The smell of your cologne
Sooths my sense,
Making me want you forever.

A year later
We’re still together
But somehow you’ve changed.
I see it in your eyes
It makes me want to cry
Even if you don’t smile only for me
You’re here even if you hate it
All you have to do is wait it out
Until I want to leave
I feel it in your cold-hearted embrace.

Yesterday you’re gone for good,
Making me want to die.
I want to run and hide from it all.
I want to never see you again
But I will never let you get that from me
I will never let you see how much you hurt me.
So when tomorrow comes I’ll be all right
Just know I’ll love but hate you forever.

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Aug 7th 2007
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angst free verse heartache poem romance youth
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This is a poem I wrote for school one year... it's different from my other stuff and it's my first open poem so it may not be to great but heck I like it!! 'Tis happy then conflicted then sad... poor girl in the poem!!!! *cries* Ok I'm done talking!

Don't remember where I got this pic.

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martysexylegs Says:

yeah how many times have we all gone thru somthing like that and this poem is very deep but nextime try not to use dates it take away the emotion from this awsome poem....

monicachaloupka Says:

hmm know the feeling...anyways great job. you sure this was your first poem?

xshortiex Says:

wow thats a strong poem