if i don't read this as poetry, the words are really moving. if i try to think of it as a poem, it loses most of the impact. BUT. it's very emotional and clear. i also like the detail on the blood drip from the skull. you made it dark, which is good. not enough people realize blood is dark.
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icarus Says:
if i don't read this as poetry, the words are really moving. if i try to think of it as a poem, it loses most of the impact. BUT. it's very emotional and clear. i also like the detail on the blood drip from the skull. you made it dark, which is good. not enough people realize blood is dark.