Longing for my Memories

I miss you memories of the past
Why weren’t you made to last?
Thinking of how much I want you back
Missing the way you all fell in track
Visions of the younger days
Maybe this is just a phase
And if so I want to know why
I have no reason, but to end this with a sigh
Just put my memories back in place
So they can lay still in my mind as if in a case
Now till the end I want to be alone
To think of the memories I used to own

> Truth of Life

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Aug 1st 2007

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This is a poem I made with the thought of old memories on my mind. Lately, me and my best friend

have been talking about our old memories of where we used to live and what we used to do together when we were younger. I sure miss those days.
Well, hope you all enjoy

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SilverShadowBlade Says:

Yup yup x3 The good ol' days :3
We can try to make memories of the teen years now too xD Well, we kinda started
Hope it continues >:3

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Rapture HalfaFoxgirl Says:

I miss those days too..
cept I really dun got any friends to have memories with so...-envies-

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doc tor nec ros Says:

nice ryme sceam, and you'll have memories from your teens also. may they be wothy of your time.

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Pixelstx Says:

i really like it. it makes me think of my father and grandfather and makes me wanna cry.

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Ozzyturtle123 Says:

I can relate. Good job.

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martysexylegs Says:

i really like but some advise.... in the begining there is great chohesivness but towards the end it sounds almost like you missed a line but you poem in a whole is a great work!

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