Truth of Life

by MonsteRockPunk

in Completed Works

Truth of Life

On the inside there’s a girl who cries
She’s just like you and me
Though she sees through the lies
That’s the way she is to be

It is said that truth is in behold of the beholder
And it is true
Believe in yourself as people believe in you
And don’t think about looking over your shoulder

Because beyond life there is more then love and friendship
There is life itself

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Jul 23rd 2007
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free free verse human human nature nature philosophical philosophical verse
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Its strange... The fact of haveing a good day then suddenly at the end of it you feel as if you've been hit by a truck. Or haveing the feeling if you really know a person or the thought of wondering if someone still cares about you when you care about them. At this moment I really don't know how to feel about anything. And now I don't even know what else to say.


I got Front Page

Thanks!

Comments

Umie Says:

It's great.

Tora Windrider Says:

somehow i always feel so eccept there is one difference, im sure about how i feel(weather or not i know the reason is a different story). i believe i express that best in one of my poems: dreaming to remember thought. your poem in my oppinion expresses the mask we all have and the feelings we all have yet try so hard to hide. we see through human emotion and sometimes it scares us but for some people it is enevitable. knowing what those people do we feel paranoia. live life and feel comfort because life is supposed to be lived. that was the meaning in a nutshel. i have no idea what mine actually says. so its intriging to me when people tell me their thoughts and oppinions.

yumeri29 Says:

AWESOME!!! this is so beautiful!!! ^^ fav!!!! ^^

SilverShadowBlade Says:

You still don't seem the deep poetry-person...but I like them :3

Love and friendship shape your life, tho.. x3

Rapture HalfaFoxgirl Says:

congrats on getting Front Page :3

monicachaloupka Says:

this is great

Ozzyturtle123 Says:

Very inspirational. You should be proud.

Gartenian Princess Says:

I like this...a lot. Nice flow to!!!

Tell Tale Heart Says:

beautiful thought and poem..