Stolen Scroll

There might be several things that are wrong, tons of things i need to work on but jeesh... I don't wanna make one more brush stroke on this one
I'm tired of it now... argh!
There is something horrid terrible wrong with this picture

Ok this is supposed to be my end of a contest held by Outerglow at dA
Where we are supposed to illustrate something from one of her Stories.
This is from the stolen scroll where Toshi fights Anko in the Chuunin exam. As she summons the stone dragon.

eh.. well... *takes a minute to think if she should post it or not....*

Toshi, and stone dragon: outerglow.deviantart.com
Art: aii..
Naruto belongs to: Kishimoto