Queen Ryoko

by Ryoko Belmont

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Jul 15th 2007
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anime fantasy queen ryoko science fiction
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Bleh. Up till 4 am last night doing this out of anger. xD

I *KNOW* there are problems with the picture; don't point them out, I know they're there.

But I'm really starting to like MS Paint again.

333 Yuuuush.... Bow to teh MS Paint....

Anyway. Ryo. Queen. You get it.

Ryoko is copyright me.

Comments

doondeka Says:

cool wanna be in my hopes and crrams club?

Tom of Forks Says:

Angry lookin' queen~

Catfeesh Says:

Very coo'. :3

Demzilla Says:

thats awesome! ^^

Kotsu Says:

That look nice Ryo^^

Shawn Millican Says:

The only reason I keep the MSP shortcut on my desktop because it's good for simple anti-aliasing and the app loads quite fast. x_x

sug chan Says:

Ah, this is very nicely done, still a few things to work on, I'm sure you know which things though so I wont tell you that.

I really like the forshorting that you tried here. A frontal sitting position isn't always easy to accomplish so I'm impressed that you handled it fairly well with few problems here. I like the facial expression it portrays the anger well.

DarkOmega Says:

Glomps at ryo Yay

Unoriginal Says:

(if you don't want critiques disable comments, it makes no sense to have comments enabled but nothing about what you did wrong is allowed)

First and foremost there seems to be NO sense of where the light is coming from and how the different materials reflect light.
The shoulders seem to be.. not on the body, by that I mean they're too far inward and kinda just floating there, the angle you chose for them is also just not working out too well. In one of her hands too, there seems to be like a broken finger... or something. Not sure if that was intentional.
It took me a moment to see she was holding a sword? mainly because it is the same color as her dress, and has no outstanding features. It also looks like you tried to slant it since one side is more lopsided than the other, however, the shading doesn't tell.
I guess the rest of the things could be written off as stylistic issues, like the hair being clumpy or the legs being under-detailed and lumpy... But I would hope that if you find errors you fix them instead of half assing your way through your gallery.

Keep up the art though.