If you aren't a lover of fanfictions, I still encourage you to read this. I poured my heart and soul into the chapter, and I'm really pleased on how it came out. ^-^
Natsuko Hitome is what I decided to name the mysterious purple-haired woman who wanted to avenge Hayate, by the way. I couldn't find out her name, so...yeah.
And now I present to you, Chapter Two!
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Comments
LilytheWolf Says:
wow, that's really pretty! ^^
moodylynn Says:
wonderful! love the name
EtherealMog Says:
It'll be interesting to see how this pans out towards the next part, it's great because you've kept the characters in their own roles and not reflected anything they wouldn't say or do, also Hinata, although being so strong and so determined when releasing the Genjutsu, seems so weak and frail and kind of even reflecting Neji's personality later on when she saw the moth. I like the flashback element and it reminds me of what Jiraiya said a couple of episodes back in Shipuuden. Interesting work, I can't wait to read more when it's written!!
pur plec loud Says:
Wonderful
I know next to nothing about Naruto, but you captured my attention anyway. Too many fanfics assume that the reader already knows the characters' personalities and leave out descriptions of that sort, but this isn't one of those. Lovely details--keep it up!
Koyuki Says:
Well. Well. This is the best-written fanfiction I've ever come across, and believe me, with as much as I read, that's likely the biggest compliment you could get. It's Naruto,and I like it. Scary.
SonicAmyForever Says:
it was pretty long but it's so great
pale immortal Says:
That was a really good chapter. I can't wait to read more.
So it was a sort of initiation into anbu, right?