please feel free to comment, id like to hear your thoughts
okay, so for like one week I've been working on this flash, Normally it was suppose to be finished at 4th of July but

well other things got in my way and since i couldnt finish it on time i decided to work alot more harder on it, so it got done now >.>; alittle late but its still good

and to think, this just happened one morning when i was bored, i decided to play around in flash and one thing lead to another and poof, i got this one week later X)
i must say i really enjoy animating, it is fun =D specially the things you are able to create, i know i still have things to learn but this is a good start for me, im hoping to do more in the future =) and maybe some voice overalls >>
Done in Flash Mx2004
Comments
Takahashi Tatsu Says:
Need A VA?!?!?! If so Hit me up!
GoLdMaGeAcE Says:
Congratulations, Edgar, excellent job with this ^^
I'm no flash animator, and as such I leave such criticism as a reminder, not as a true critique.
One thing I must say, however, is that sometimes the flash animations took a bit long to come into play. There were a few times where pauses were a bit...unnecessary and lengthy. I'm sure you understand. But I'm nobody to speak of flash
If you want my take on the language portion, however, I'm all ears and awaiting your signal, captain ^^
All in all, though, this deserves a fave.
TtheHedgehog Says:
I agree with the two men above me. Also, I too am a VA, so if you need one, hit me up to. I got quite a range of characters in my arsenal.
>.>
Karasu Sensei Says:
I'll agree about the pauses, sometimes I was wondering if anything was gonna happen, but otherwise I thought It was great, when I first started in flash i couldn't make shit....lol most things I make in flash are still crap. I just don't have the patients for it.
If you use voices in future flashed I would take the time to make the mouth movements fit the words, it can be annoying and time consuming but it looks good o3o.